With this piece I decided to make some pretty major changes including re-stretching the canvas in a smaller size. This allowed me to slightly adjust the composition in a way I feel favors the piece. I also made a lot of changes to the overall light in the piece and added quite a bit of texture. The end result, I think, is a better piece that is much more representative of what I experienced when I saw the idea in person.
Here is the before....

And after.....


